I
started reading St. Paul’s letter to the Romans and I was really struck with
the opening seventeen lines. Here’s the
New American Bible translation which divides the seventeen lines in a greeting,
a thanksgiving, and a profession of the Gospel.
I took a few liberties with the arrangement on the page so I could
emphasize the individual sentences. I
put the line number in parenthesizes and did not separate according to
established line numbers so that one could read the sentence as it flows.
The
NAB translation has been criticized for its lack luster English, and while the
diction may not be elevated I find the rhythm of the sentences rather
pleasing. When people criticize bible
translations for not having lofty or sublime language, they are usually
reacting to the diction. But diction
should be a function of the original text.
It should approximate the original language’s style, elevated or low,
simple or flowery. If the original text
is not lofty in its original language, then I don’t see any reason why the
translation should be. I can’t speak to
the diction choices made for any of the translations since I don’t read the
original Hebrew or Greek. But I can appreciate the sentence arrangement. Here it should also approximate the original
style but it should have modern rhythm.
Quick
orientation: Paul is writing to the Christian community in Rome for an upcoming
visit. He has been planning such a visit
for many years, but his plans have been repeatedly disrupted, mainly because he’s
been incarcerated for preaching Christianity.
Paul’s Epistle to the Romans
Greeting
(1) Paul, a slave of Christ Jesus, called
to be an apostle and set apart for the gospel of God, (2) which he promised
previously through his prophets in the holy scriptures, (3) the gospel about
his Son, descended from David according to the flesh, (4) but established as
Son of God in power according to the spirit of holiness through resurrection
from the dead, Jesus Christ our Lord.
(5) Through him we have received the
grace of apostleship, to bring about the obedience of faith, for the sake of his
name, among all the Gentiles, (6) among whom are you also, who are called to
belong to Jesus Christ; (7) to all the beloved of God in Rome, called to be
holy.
Grace to you and peace from God our Father
and the Lord Jesus Christ.
Thanksgiving
(8) First, I give thanks to my God
through Jesus Christ for all of you, because your faith is heralded throughout
the world.
(9) God is my witness, whom I serve with
my spirit in proclaiming the gospel of his Son, that I remember you constantly,
(10) always asking in my prayers that somehow by God’s will I may at last find
my way clear to come to you.
(11) For I long to see you, that I may
share with you some spiritual gift so that you may be strengthened, (12) that
is, that you and I may be mutually encouraged by one another’s faith, yours and
mine.
(13) I do not want you to be unaware,
brothers, that I often planned to come to you, though I was prevented until
now, that I might harvest some fruit among you, too, as among the rest of the
Gentiles.
(14) To Greeks and non-Greeks alike, to
the wise and the ignorant, I am under obligation; (15) that is why I am eager
to preach the gospel also to you in Rome.
God’s Power for Salvation
(16) For I am not ashamed of the gospel.
It is the power of God for the salvation
of everyone who believes: for Jew first, and then Greek.
(17) For in it is revealed the righteousness
of God from faith to faith; as it is written, “The one who is righteous by
faith will live.”
I
love that part about mutually encouraging one another’s faith. Faith does seem to increase as more
participate together. I hope you got to
appreciate the rhythm of the sentences, but more importantly I hope it provided
a touch of faith for this Friday.
I liked this post. Thanx. You don't often write Christian posts.
ReplyDeleteGod bless you and yours.
Oh it's more frequent than you think. I have a recurring "Faith Filled Friday" category where I post some sort of devotion. And they are all Christian. Now I don't post one every Friday, but judging from the Labels count on the side there it's the most frequent Label. Click it and run through some of my Faith Fill Friday posts.
DeleteJust clicked the Label on the side and read a few Faith Filled Fridays. I must visit here more often.
ReplyDeleteI just noticed the Rolling Stones Label. Must visit that.
God bless.