I’m still reading Hopkins’ poetry and came across a
seasonal poem perfect for this week.
Autumn came upon us yesterday, and I’ll commemorate the day with this little
poem.
Spring
and Fall
by Gerard Manley
Hopkins
to
a young child
Márgarét, áre you
gríeving
Over Goldengrove
unleaving?
Leáves, like the things
of man, you
With your fresh
thoughts care for, can you?
Ah! ás the heart grows
older
It will come to such
sights colder
By and by, nor spare a
sigh
Though worlds of
wanwood leafmeal lie;
And yet you will weep
and know why.
Now no matter, child,
the name:
Sórrow’s spríngs áre
the same.
Nor mouth had, no nor
mind, expressed
What heart heard of,
ghost guessed:
It ís the blight man
was born for,
It is Margaret you
mourn for.
I’m
not going to do a full analysis of this, but I’ll give you a little background
and orient you since Hopkins’s style obfuscates more than most would like. First the context. This apparently came from a real life occurrence. While Hopkins was assigned as a priest in a
parish in Liverpool in the early 1880s, he had duty to travel to a country
suburb, Lydiate in Lancanshire, a half hour’s train ride, to serve the small Catholic
community there. One small girl,
Margaret, from that community was apparently mourning the falling leaves of the
autumn season, and so inspired this poem, of which he dedicated it to her. You can see the play on both spring (“sorrow’s
spring”) and fall (“Goldengrove unleaving”).
But “fall” has further significance.
What the narrator tells the girl—in the poem at least, I doubt Hopkins
actually said this to her—is that her deeper sadness is not just for the leaves
but for the passing of men, which the leaves symbolize, and that ultimately the
sadness is for her eventual passing. The
fall is linked to the fall from Eden from which mortality began. And so we have an innocent young girl—I picture
her about eight years old—who learns of the passing of nature, the passing of
mankind, and of her mortality.
There
are some really fine lines to appreciate.
I particularly like this couplet: “Nor mouth had, no nor mind, expressed/What
heart heard of, ghost guessed.” I love
all the alliterations in that sentence, despite the typical Hopkins tongue-tying
fashion. And how lovely is “By and by,
nor spare a sigh/Though worlds of wanwood leafmeal lie”? I can’t find any definition for “wanwood.” Perhaps it’s a local slang or a Hopkins
coinage. It has a melancholy sound to
it, perhaps suggesting wood that is wan, that is, weak or feeble.
What
I don’t care for in the poem are the accents Hopkins places on certain words. First, I don’t think they really alter any
word he accents. I would have stressed
those words whether Hopkins accented them or not. Second, I find accenting in English
particularly annoying. Though it doesn’t
happen in this poem, altering the language stress to fit a poetic objective seems
awkward. I prefer to let the language
run naturally. The one place where the
accent does seem to serve a minor purpose here is on the last syllable of
Margaret. It emphasizes the “ret” sound
which couples nicely with the “And yet” of the ninth line. It is said that Hopkins is a proto-modernist,
but the use of accentuation for me places him closer to the Victorian poets of
his own day, who also played around with accenting, and not with the modernist.
Still,
it’s a lovely poem.
Manny! Don't blame any of your readers if they don't comment cause I myself after having read all of this,,, it seems like am being forced by this spring and fall weather to say a few words about this dream, I mean thoughts of Hopkins tongue-tying fashion of this so called poem.
ReplyDeleteI really should not even attempt to comment without checking out what the internet is saying about this gentle man in reality but then again, some of my spiritual reality angel godly cell species of my so called seven per sent age "Jesus" might tell me to give "IT" a go... Nice try Man but I think that "ME", "MYSELF" "I" will pass, "I" mean your knowledge is way too much for little old me and I'm not about to start reading so that I might satisfy some of your spiritual whims of past springs and fall on my head again.
Alright! Seeing that YA can’t find any definition for “wanwood.”, I'll simply wave my French accenting wan and assume that Mr. Hopkins could be getting weak and/or feeble in his old age and leave "IT" at that..
Manny! I can't wait for your honest educated come back lines...LOL :)
God Bless
Victor, make sure you read part 2 of my posting of "Spring and Fall." It's the very next post. If you know French, which I know you do, you might be interested.
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