In
my Plans for 2015 Reads, I mentioned I would start a new feature this year where I would present a great
speech from history and perform a little analysis on it. Well, I’ve been trying to find the time to start
that off. So here’s an ideal moment, the
fourth of July.
I’m
going to start with Henry Lee III’s famous eulogy of George Washington. Lee,
a fellow Virginian, serve with Washington in the Revolutionary War, and at one
time was Governor of Virginia. He was
also the father of the Civil War General, Robert E. Lee.
Amazingly
I could not find the entire speech on the internet. You can find that famous first paragraph that
is often quoted, but I was at a loss to get a hold of the entire thing. So, I had to type it out myself. It’s not a very long speech. My copy comes from William Safire’s
collection, Lend Me Your Ears: Great
Speeches in History.
First in war—first in
peace—and first in the hearts of his countrymen, he was second to none in the
humble and endearing scenes of private life; pious, humane, temperate, and
sincere; uniform, dignified, and commanding, his example was as edifying to all
around him as were the effects of that example lasting.
To his equals he was
condescending, to his inferiors kind, and to the dear object of his affections exemplarily
tender; correct throughout, vice shuddered in his presence, and virtue always
felt his fostering hand; the purity of his private character gave effulgence to
his public virtues.
His last scene comported
with the whole tenor of his life—although in extreme pain, not a sigh, not a
groan escaped him; and with undisturbed serenity he closed his well spent
life. Such was the man America has lost—such
was the man for whom our nation mourns.
Methinks I see his august
image, and I hear falling from his venerable lips these deep-sinking words:
“Cease, sons of America,
lamenting our separation; go on, and confirm by your wisdom the fruits of our
joint councils, joint efforts, and common dangers; reverence religion, diffuse
knowledge throughout your land, patronize the arts and sciences; let liberty
and order be inseparable companions. Control
party spirit, the bane of free governments; observe good faith to, and cultivate
peace with, all nations, shut up every avenue to foreign influence, contract
rather than extend national connection, rely on ourselves only: be Americans in
thought, word, and deed—thus will you give immortality to that union which was
the constant object of my terrestrial labors; thus will you preserve undisturbed
to the latest posterity the felicity of a people to me most dear, and thus will
you supply (if my happiness is now aught to you) the only vacancy in the round
of pure bliss high heaven bestows.”
Certainly
that is such a memorable beginning using the rhetorical device called anaphora (the
sequence of a repeated first word), here constructed in a sequence of three
components: “First in war—first in peace—and first in the hearts of his
countrymen.” Writing in elements of
threes creates a sense of completeness that twos lack, and greater than threes
suggest you can’t fully pin down. You
should try to construct many sentences in elements of threes in writing, but in
a speech you should always construct in threes.
The ear picks up on the threes even more so than in writing. Even as Lee goes on to list an abundance of Washington’s
attributes, he divides them into groups of threes.
I
also found the conclusion fascinating. Lee
almost brings Washington to life by calling forth “his august image,” and then
does something that is brilliant: he allows the image of Washington to speak
from the dead in that last paragraph.
Notice also the tone shift (it heightens into a more formal tone) when
he has Washington “speak.”
I
hope that brought you back to our founding fathers. I revere George Washington above all our
other founders. Pious, dignified,
ascetic, noble in a natural sense.
Virtue I think is the most precise adjective.
Happy
Fourth of July!
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